story show off

[Flowersunshine]

Since creations aren't limited to the magic makers or colouringbooks: here I want to show of my small guides and a short story:
http://www.emeraldactivities.com/index.php/topic,7691.0.html (story)

http://www.emeraldactivities.com/index.php/topic,7584.0.html
http://www.emeraldactivities.com/index.php/topic,7226.0.html
(small guides)

I'd very much appriciate any kind of comment. Well, nasty ones are not appriciated, but I don't mind you saying you don't like it, since everyone has his on taste. So please tell me what you think.
(And thanks to those who have already read and responded, I loved your comments!)